In your eyes
One more time
Let me see...
The little rose tinted reflection
That you've created of me...
Can you see past him?
The little man in your eyes?
Standing between you and me
And concealing all my lies...
I want to be him,
I want to be what you see
I want to never disappoint you
With what I really turned out to be...
Don't blink,
Don't blink...
This, this here, this now this is fine...
This refection that you cast...
I can pretend it's mine...
A little longer.
Don't blink...
















Comments
Only real suggestion: change "you're" in the first line to "your". As of now it's grammatically incorrect.
Also, you've mentioned in previous works and journals that you're working on a story or novel? Will you ever post that anywhere, because if so, I would be very interested in reading it.
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If my picture is fat you'd call me a fatty
If my picture is skinny you'd call me a skinny
Yet if my picture is swirled you'd say i photoshopped it
Well, that's why I never post any of my writing I really care about. Everything in my gallery is considered "expendable", though I'd certainly be pissed if anyone had the gall to steal a piece.
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And the days fly by with no mercy...
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I'm a child cleverly disguised as an adult
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