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Dear Sarah,
I’m writing a letter to you,
In my head
From across the room
Don’t worry, I wont send it
You’ll never read this
You’ll never know I was thinking this
You could never read me
So well as you thought you could.

Dear Sarah,
Wishing you where here
Sitting close beside me
We are miles away… miles away…
Sitting in this awkward silence
Alone together
While our friends talk
And laugh
And play.

You don’t see me
You don’t know me
So well as you think you do
I’d really like you to
I like you
But you’re not so interested
Not so interested as me
I’m sending you a postcard
From where I wish that you could be

Enclosed in this letter,
You can not read
From my heart to yours
I send to you, the last piece of me
Worth having anymore
Keep it, break it, love it, hate it
But please don’t forget it

Dearest Sarah,
I’ve written this letter, too many times
How silly, that I wont send it
It might not matter
But here it is,
I love you.

Sincerely,
            Me
©2006-2009 ^budgie
:iconbudgie:

Author's Comments

There is no Sarah, I just use the name alot in my poetry.

Take it for what it is or just leave it alone. Don't make me disable comments.

Cred to ~reiko-stocks for the image used for the preview.

Comments


:iconfreyja1984:
Very lovely an elegant. I like your style, and that's comming from a hardcore prose fan ^^

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Freak- Someone who reminds you of how ordinary you are. :finger:

That's MS. STALKER to you pal!
:icontornprince90:
It feels light hearted even though it's a rough subject. It's probably the image you posted with it. I enjoyed it. Very touching.
:icononinisou:
Ah that is awesome. :aww:

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No emotion can save me...
See it in these eyes...
Feel it against my skin...

I'll act...just so at least,
You, will think I am still real.
:iconneurocidic:
You're amazing.

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"..Posion goes better with Grenadine."
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--TSN
:iconfirozaki:
it feels very lovely and sad at the same time... slightly hesitant, the feeling of longing for her. hey, this aint half bad at all :)

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Boom!
:icondaghrgenzen:
I agree with ~Firozaki - the letter writer obviously is longing for this Sarah, but just can't express it but only in his head... or, at least, that's how I get it. :]

The preview fits the poem; that's good. ^^


You write well. ^^

--
Kit, "How about your love life?"
Steve, "That should occupy all of ten seconds. My love life is like the Loch Ness Monster - rumours of its existence are greatly exaggerated."
-Killing the Shadows, Val McDermid.
:iconsquex:
This is a really beautiful poetry, and this could as well be a really good song by you :)

The first piece of the text is the best one! Keep on the amazing writting work :)

:+fav:

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My metal band:
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:icongarnetsand:
Aw, that's so beautiful, and sad at the same time. :(
:iconwowkrynne:
:cries: So heart-wrenchingly adorable!!!!!!

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